See you all there. I may not sound pretty but I'll do my best. Keep a safe distance!
-v
A private blog for Victor Navone's "Advanced Animation Critique" class at the Animation Collaborative, Winter 2017 session.
Wednesday, March 29, 2017
Heads up: I might cancel class tonight
Hi class,
I've been sick the last few days, and if I don't think I'll be able to speak tonight then I'll cancel. I'll post again by 3pm to let you know for sure. Either way I will still review your work on SyncSketch.
Stand by...
-v
I've been sick the last few days, and if I don't think I'll be able to speak tonight then I'll cancel. I'll post again by 3pm to let you know for sure. Either way I will still review your work on SyncSketch.
Stand by...
-v
Monday, March 27, 2017
Ricardo Pantomime Update
Hey Victor,
Here's an update on my shot. I'm going to move forward by adding more controls and making sure nothing feels too stiff in the meantime.
Thanks,
Ricardo
https://syncsketch.com/playground/8194ceea1f17457b858b9828b0033c70#165270
Here's an update on my shot. I'm going to move forward by adding more controls and making sure nothing feels too stiff in the meantime.
Thanks,
Ricardo
https://syncsketch.com/playground/8194ceea1f17457b858b9828b0033c70#165270
Thursday, March 23, 2017
dialogue idea
Hello Victor,
Please give me feedback about my dialogue idea.
I'm not sure if the idea is too complicate. I'm thinking of the subtext that she says
"You know what, I don't care but you should keep in mind those earrings are not free"
or
"Hey did you just lie to me, tell me everything!"

Dialogue Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9lfwhnqgda9ak55/messingAround02.wav?dl=0
Thank you!
Please give me feedback about my dialogue idea.
"You know what, I don't care but you should keep in mind those earrings are not free"
or
"Hey did you just lie to me, tell me everything!"

Dialogue Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9lfwhnqgda9ak55/messingAround02.wav?dl=0
Thank you!
Monday, March 20, 2017
Update on "Am i dying" 2 person lip sync shot
Hi,
Here's an update on my shot. I re-blocked the guy completely, hope this works better. Its uploaded to the Week 9 syncsketch link. Would love some feedback, thank you!
Cheers,
Rhea
Here's an update on my shot. I re-blocked the guy completely, hope this works better. Its uploaded to the Week 9 syncsketch link. Would love some feedback, thank you!
Cheers,
Rhea
Sunday, March 19, 2017
Week 9 - Ken's Shot refining on syncsketch - would love feedback
Hey everyone,
Hope you're all having a great weekend. I took another pass at my shot and would love some feedback. It's up on SynchSketch week 9. I still haven't spend much time on the driver yet. I'm getting eager to start digging into the lip sync for the main character. Let me know what you think. Thanks,
Ken
Hope you're all having a great weekend. I took another pass at my shot and would love some feedback. It's up on SynchSketch week 9. I still haven't spend much time on the driver yet. I'm getting eager to start digging into the lip sync for the main character. Let me know what you think. Thanks,
Ken
Wednesday, March 15, 2017
Ken will be late to class tonight
Hi everyone,
I have a meeting I need to attend before our class tonight, so I will be a little late, hopefully there before 7:30.
See you all later,
Ken
I have a meeting I need to attend before our class tonight, so I will be a little late, hopefully there before 7:30.
See you all later,
Ken
Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Sunday, March 12, 2017
Update - Pun
Hello Victor!
I've made some adjustments to the pose of the guy in the beginning. I shifted some of the timing between them in order to make the part that he jerks off look more stand out. I'm also not sure with his expression when he is about to drink. Please provide some feedbacks.
By the way, I haven't changed in the ending yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/136462#159790
I've made some adjustments to the pose of the guy in the beginning. I shifted some of the timing between them in order to make the part that he jerks off look more stand out. I'm also not sure with his expression when he is about to drink. Please provide some feedbacks.
By the way, I haven't changed in the ending yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/136462#159790
Saturday, March 11, 2017
Updates
Hi Victor,
So I made some updates to my shot, I implemented the notes you gave me on Wednesday and added in the new gestures we talked about when he's talking.
I'm getting to the point where I was going to take him out of stepped mode and thought this would be a good point to check in and see if you had any thoughts.
I've uploaded here on sync sketch.
Thanks in advance!
Preet
So I made some updates to my shot, I implemented the notes you gave me on Wednesday and added in the new gestures we talked about when he's talking.
I'm getting to the point where I was going to take him out of stepped mode and thought this would be a good point to check in and see if you had any thoughts.
I've uploaded here on sync sketch.
Thanks in advance!
Preet
Tuesday, March 7, 2017
Three Options for storekeeper
Hi everyone,
I made three poses for the storekeeper, but I'm not sure which one should I go for. Any feedback would be great. Thanks.
I made three poses for the storekeeper, but I'm not sure which one should I go for. Any feedback would be great. Thanks.
First.
Second.
Third.(I afraid it might be a bit distracting to see his face.)
Sunday, March 5, 2017
Ken -- work in progress updates on SynchSketch
Hi Everyone,
I've uploaded a new IP to synchsketch Week 7.
Notes:
1.) Shifted the camera so that the driver's face is fully in frame.
2.) Changed it up so that the passenger is talking to someone on the phone, rather than to the driver, and I think you're right Victor, having him passively aggressively complaining about the car seems to be working better.
3.) The passenger now runs his finger over the seat and then casts a look of disgust at the driver. After he reacts to the dirt on his finger he shifts his body away from the driver.
4.) The driver is just dummy geometry, no animation, which is why he looks like a wight. please disregard. (http://gameofthrones.wikia.com/wiki/Wights)
5.) I've been working on getting the timing a little snappier, and varying up the gestures a bit.
Would love some feedback!
Thanks,
Ken
I've uploaded a new IP to synchsketch Week 7.
Notes:
1.) Shifted the camera so that the driver's face is fully in frame.
2.) Changed it up so that the passenger is talking to someone on the phone, rather than to the driver, and I think you're right Victor, having him passively aggressively complaining about the car seems to be working better.
3.) The passenger now runs his finger over the seat and then casts a look of disgust at the driver. After he reacts to the dirt on his finger he shifts his body away from the driver.
4.) The driver is just dummy geometry, no animation, which is why he looks like a wight. please disregard. (http://gameofthrones.wikia.com/wiki/Wights)
5.) I've been working on getting the timing a little snappier, and varying up the gestures a bit.
Would love some feedback!
Thanks,
Ken
Please take a look at my IP
Hello Victor,
I've addressed your notes to adjust the poses and add the ending. I did some ip on her in the beginning part but I haven't add a small laugh when she exhales as you suggested yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/134419#156700
I've addressed your notes to adjust the poses and add the ending. I did some ip on her in the beginning part but I haven't add a small laugh when she exhales as you suggested yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/134419#156700
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