Thursday, March 23, 2017

dialogue idea

Hello Victor,

Please give me feedback about my dialogue idea.
I'm not sure if the idea is too complicate. I'm thinking of the subtext that she says

"You know what, I don't care but you should keep in mind those earrings are not free"
or
"Hey did you just lie to me, tell me everything!"


Dialogue Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9lfwhnqgda9ak55/messingAround02.wav?dl=0

Thank you!
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  1. Victor NavoneMarch 26, 2017 at 9:47 PM

    Hi Pun, I think this is a good choice - I like the 2nd subtext idea, where she thinks she's caught her friend lying or withholding information. You could make her very playful, like she's enjoying embarrassing her friend, or If she's truly jealous the acting could be more serious/judgemental. That's all I've got to say for now. Go for it!
    -v

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