Saturday, April 1, 2017

Layout for a new shot

Hi Victor! This is the layout and the modification of cheerleader. I decided to put her in the restroom talking to her friend. I'm not sure if the shot is too wide or I should add a shoulder of another character in the scene.

I also shot some references. Please take a look : https://www.dropbox.com/s/jr9wbqsig5vh2ma/ref.mp4?dl=0


Thank you!
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  1. Victor NavoneApril 3, 2017 at 9:06 AM

    Hi Pun,
    The layout looks good - the camera maybe a little too wide, but I like that we can see a little bit of the sinks in the foreground. They suggest that there may be mirrors behind the camera to screen left. You might consider having her face the mirrors at some point, as if she was in the process of washing her hands, putting on makeup, etc. Think about what she might have been doing just before the dialog. Did she come in to the bathroom just to talk to her friend, or was she doing something else there?
    As for the acting, there are some good gestures in there but I think you need to increase the sass! There's such a big vocal change on "he's not gonna give you" that I think you need to accent, and "boo-tay" needs more emphasis. I suggest looking at more reference if you haven't already. Movies that come to mind are "Step Up", "Mean Girls", "Clueless"... I'm sure you can find a lot of reality shows with this kind of behavior as well.
    -v

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