Hi everyone,
I have a meeting I need to attend before our class tonight, so I will be a little late, hopefully there before 7:30.
See you all later,
Ken
A private blog for Victor Navone's "Advanced Animation Critique" class at the Animation Collaborative, Winter 2017 session.
Wednesday, March 15, 2017
Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Sunday, March 12, 2017
Update - Pun
Hello Victor!
I've made some adjustments to the pose of the guy in the beginning. I shifted some of the timing between them in order to make the part that he jerks off look more stand out. I'm also not sure with his expression when he is about to drink. Please provide some feedbacks.
By the way, I haven't changed in the ending yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/136462#159790
I've made some adjustments to the pose of the guy in the beginning. I shifted some of the timing between them in order to make the part that he jerks off look more stand out. I'm also not sure with his expression when he is about to drink. Please provide some feedbacks.
By the way, I haven't changed in the ending yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/136462#159790
Saturday, March 11, 2017
Updates
Hi Victor,
So I made some updates to my shot, I implemented the notes you gave me on Wednesday and added in the new gestures we talked about when he's talking.
I'm getting to the point where I was going to take him out of stepped mode and thought this would be a good point to check in and see if you had any thoughts.
I've uploaded here on sync sketch.
Thanks in advance!
Preet
So I made some updates to my shot, I implemented the notes you gave me on Wednesday and added in the new gestures we talked about when he's talking.
I'm getting to the point where I was going to take him out of stepped mode and thought this would be a good point to check in and see if you had any thoughts.
I've uploaded here on sync sketch.
Thanks in advance!
Preet
Tuesday, March 7, 2017
Three Options for storekeeper
Hi everyone,
I made three poses for the storekeeper, but I'm not sure which one should I go for. Any feedback would be great. Thanks.
I made three poses for the storekeeper, but I'm not sure which one should I go for. Any feedback would be great. Thanks.
First.
Second.
Third.(I afraid it might be a bit distracting to see his face.)
Sunday, March 5, 2017
Ken -- work in progress updates on SynchSketch
Hi Everyone,
I've uploaded a new IP to synchsketch Week 7.
Notes:
1.) Shifted the camera so that the driver's face is fully in frame.
2.) Changed it up so that the passenger is talking to someone on the phone, rather than to the driver, and I think you're right Victor, having him passively aggressively complaining about the car seems to be working better.
3.) The passenger now runs his finger over the seat and then casts a look of disgust at the driver. After he reacts to the dirt on his finger he shifts his body away from the driver.
4.) The driver is just dummy geometry, no animation, which is why he looks like a wight. please disregard. (http://gameofthrones.wikia.com/wiki/Wights)
5.) I've been working on getting the timing a little snappier, and varying up the gestures a bit.
Would love some feedback!
Thanks,
Ken
I've uploaded a new IP to synchsketch Week 7.
Notes:
1.) Shifted the camera so that the driver's face is fully in frame.
2.) Changed it up so that the passenger is talking to someone on the phone, rather than to the driver, and I think you're right Victor, having him passively aggressively complaining about the car seems to be working better.
3.) The passenger now runs his finger over the seat and then casts a look of disgust at the driver. After he reacts to the dirt on his finger he shifts his body away from the driver.
4.) The driver is just dummy geometry, no animation, which is why he looks like a wight. please disregard. (http://gameofthrones.wikia.com/wiki/Wights)
5.) I've been working on getting the timing a little snappier, and varying up the gestures a bit.
Would love some feedback!
Thanks,
Ken
Please take a look at my IP
Hello Victor,
I've addressed your notes to adjust the poses and add the ending. I did some ip on her in the beginning part but I haven't add a small laugh when she exhales as you suggested yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/134419#156700
I've addressed your notes to adjust the poses and add the ending. I did some ip on her in the beginning part but I haven't add a small laugh when she exhales as you suggested yet.
Thank you!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/134419#156700
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