Final upload

Hi Victor,

I just posted a new version with all the fixes. I’d appreciate any help you give me with this.

Poop
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/143997#175570

I can't sleep
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/143997#175571

Best,
Lily

Final Upload - PUN

Hello Victor,

Hope you have a good time in Las vegas. I just posted an update addressing your notes from last class. Would love to have some feedback from you.

I had a hard time with her lip sync since she speaks pretty fast and I'm afraid that her mouth would look too busy.
I'm not sure with the part around frame 120 if she should stop after she points the finger or I should give her some movement. I also pushed the boo-tay part but still not sure if I have pushed it enough.

Thank you for a great class! Hope to be your student again soon!

Best,
Pun

Here is the link: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/143997#175984

Final update

Hi Victor,

This is the final update. I try to hide the upper teeth, but only move upper teeth just feel wrong to me. Therefore, I lower the top lip as well. I'm not sure is it too much or just right. Please take a look. By the way, hope the background is correct!

Thanks for taking time to give us feedback during the middle of the weeks. Great class and great teacher! Thank you!

Here is the link: Final Update

Best,
Al

final upload

Hey Victor,

Hope you had a good Easter. When you have some time was wondering if you'd mind taking a final look at my shot. Just posted up a new version with all the fixes from the last class and a little more cleanup/polish.

Also just would like to say thank you very much for all the help and advice you gave throughout this course. I've learned a great deal and feel through your guidance I've grown as an animator.

Best!

Preet
Final Upload

Group photo! Here you go~

Victor,

Thank you for your guidance, I have learned a lot of things from you.  I appreciate you so much. Thanks J

ANIM JAM !

Hi Everyone,

I just posted my Anim Jam shot on sync sketch, and now I'm about to head to the airport for a red-eye. Just wanted to tell you all that I really enjoyed having class with all of you. Everyone did such great work. Let's keep in touch. Have fun tomorrow.

-Ken

p.s. The set in my shot was generously provided to me by a guy on Sketchfab named Nosfera -- I found the model yesterday and luckily he responded quickly and was willing to send it to me today.

In progress

Hi Victor,

Just thought I'd load up progress so far this week, if you have some time would love some feed back on where things stand right now.

thanks in advance!

Preet
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/143997#170707

Ricardo Reel Review

Hey Victor,

Here's my reel with the new shot added as IP. Does the order of reel work?

Thanks in advance!
Ricardo

https://syncsketch.com/playground/7952993fe9ab4ad4a64af2741dcd2efd#168854

Ken updated shot on sync sketch

Hi Victor,

I've posted an updated shot to Week 11 on sync sketch. I'm planning to work on it tomorrow night (Tuesday). I'd love some feedback before then if you can.

Thanks,

Ken

Ricardo Pantomime Update

Hey Victor,

Here's an update on my shot. I'm still working on polishing everything from the purse to the leg pops as well as adding the animation to her jacket at the end.

Thanks,

Ricardo

https://syncsketch.com/playground/fbf7a6c7dbe543818a164769920b3c63#167444

Brow notes

Hi Class, here are the notes from last week's lecture on Brows.

Sorry I didn't get to reviewing blog posts this weekend - my Mac is in the shop and I've have family visiting.  Will try to do some today.
-v

Preet shot update

Hi Victor,

If you have a chance to look, I posted an update to my shot. I applied the fix notes you gave me from class on both characters, with the changes in timing of his look back and forth to her and to his hand as well as the other notes. Planning on working through a polish pass on his body throughout and further pass on his face.

On her i've more or less tied down her motion now, chopping in the first half and then grabbing stuff in the second half, going to add some props to make that a bit clearer but I think it works.

Would love any feed back on how it stands...

Thanks in advance!

Preet

shot

New Shot Brief Description

Hi Victor,

This shot is Adam rig test, and the purpose of this project is to test the flexibility of this rig modification. Therefore, I modified this rig like Spock, and I'm just having fun to animate it. I feel it's a bit challenging because Spock is a character who doesn't reveal too much emotion. I'm not sure about do I move him too much? Also, I am not sure does his lids and brows looks like him through the whole shot and does the brow's emotion reads well? Pleas take a look. Thanks.

Shot brief: Spock had an argument with Captain Kirk about making a decision of the attack in the middle of a meeting with the general, so he is trying to convince the general to take his advice.

Here is ref: https://www.dropbox.com/s/cmq38vjv68mlgf5/Ref2.mp4?dl=0

Here is blocking: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/141370#166682

Layout for a new shot

Hi Victor! This is the layout and the modification of cheerleader. I decided to put her in the restroom talking to her friend. I'm not sure if the shot is too wide or I should add a shoulder of another character in the scene.

I also shot some references. Please take a look : https://www.dropbox.com/s/jr9wbqsig5vh2ma/ref.mp4?dl=0


Thank you!

Class is on.

See you all there.  I may not sound pretty but I'll do my best.  Keep a safe distance!
-v

Heads up: I might cancel class tonight

Hi class,
I've been sick the last few days, and if I don't think I'll be able to speak tonight then I'll cancel. I'll post again by 3pm to let you know for sure.  Either way I will still review your work on SyncSketch.
Stand by...
-v

Ricardo Pantomime Update

Hey Victor,

Here's an update on my shot. I'm going to move forward by adding more controls and making sure nothing feels too stiff in the meantime.

Thanks,
Ricardo

https://syncsketch.com/playground/8194ceea1f17457b858b9828b0033c70#165270

dialogue idea

Hello Victor,

Please give me feedback about my dialogue idea.

I'm not sure if the idea is too complicate. I'm thinking of the subtext that she says

"You know what, I don't care but you should keep in mind those earrings are not free"
or
"Hey did you just lie to me, tell me everything!"


Dialogue Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9lfwhnqgda9ak55/messingAround02.wav?dl=0

Thank you!

Lecture notes

Here are the past couple of lecture notes:
Polish
Eyes

Update on "Am i dying" 2 person lip sync shot

Hi,

Here's an update on my shot. I re-blocked the guy completely, hope this works better. Its uploaded to the Week 9 syncsketch link. Would love some feedback, thank you!

Cheers,
Rhea